Audience feedback

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

Audience Feedback Questionnaire

From 1 being the highest and 5 being the lowest, please answer the following questions:

1. How well does the documentary flow?

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2. How informative is the documentary?

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3. Does the sound and music fit the documentary?

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4. Would this five minute extract encourage you to watch the full program and why?

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5. How would you rate our documentary in terms of being entertaining?

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6. Do you think the camerawork and editing used made our extract look professional?

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7. Do you think our program suits our target audience of young adults?

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8. How appropriate is our documentary for channel 4 and why?

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9. How effective is our radio trailer at advertising our documentary?

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10. Does the print advert catch your eye?

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11. Do you think our voice over fits the topic of the documentary?

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we put our documetary on facebook to see what our peers and target audience thought of our 5 minute preview this is their feedback:

Pictures for our newspaper advert

Using photoshop, the final we picture we chosen was edited in order to create a bigger image on the adverts and to make it to a professional standard. We also added our scheduling with the fonts available on the programe and also the channel 4 logo. Everything we included were important codes and conventions of pront adverts in newspapers.

After cutting out the image out carefully, we added the channel 4 logo to the roght hand side of the A4 page with also including text at the right hand side corner with appropiate font that was relevant to the documentary.

As you can see the text included:

"Does my bum look big in this"

Nobody's Perfect

Thursday 9PM, Channel 4.

Then we moved on to the outling of the text and we decided to use a white background so that our text would stand out. This is an important code and convention of print ads ad the text needs to indent on the page.

This is the text tool:

Realsing that the channel 4 logo was too small, we decided that it needed to be slighlty bigger. Pressing Ctrl+T enabled this. We then dragged the corner with our mouse and proceeded.

drafting our newspaper advert

We decided to change our newspaper advert as we thought our previous idea would not work:
- our ad will include an image of a persons bum showing the top if it slightly (the image will cover the whole of the A4 page
- Sheduling and slogan and title of documentary on right hand side (bottem)
- channel 4 logo on left hnd side
- Slogan: "Does my bum look big in this?"

this is a draft of what we would like our advert would look like.

 

Drafting newspaper advert

original ideas
our original idea was to get different body parts from different people to show their different body images

-it was to include a male and female with differnt body parts from different people connoting how people would change their body image to look a certain way.
- it would include our scheduling (Thursday 9PM, Channel 4)
- also our slogan "How far would you go to reach perfection the title of our documentary
This would all be n the right hand side of the print (at bottem)
- it would include the channel 4 logo
This would be on the left handside of the print ad.

Codes and Conventions of a newspaper advert

As a class, we discussed codes and conventions of newspaper advertisements for documentaries. The following link shows examples of of the print adverts we looked at as a class:

http://www.4creative.co.uk/flash/#/print/press_and_poster/


This is a picture of our class notes:

- Title: font is relevant to topic
- Channel logo: stands out (indent)
- Slogan is relevant to content(eyecatching and intriguing)

Recording and editing our radio trailer

We recorded our radio trailer in a radio studio inside school. We made we had no interuptions and that everything said was captured clearly.

We then used Premire Pro ao that we could cut and edit of radion trailer where appropiate.
this picture is all of the footage that we used in our radio trailer

Editing

here is some pictures of what technolgy we used when editing:

Script of radio trailer

Music: Nobody's Perfect by Jessie J

Voice over: Is there anything you want to change about your body?

Vox pops:
1. my weight
2. my nose
3. bigger mucseles
4.better tan
5.my boobs!

Voice over: How far would you go to make those changes?

Vox pops:
1. lipo suction
2. weight watchers
3. tattoo makeup
4. take steriods
5. boob job!

Voice over: Are we a nation obsessed with how we look?

Vox pop: "Does my bum look big in this?"

Voice over: find out on thursday night, 9PM, channel 4

Music at end: "Nobody's perfect, NO".

Codes and Conventions of a radio tariler

- voice over: anchors meaning, asks rhetorical questions- relevant to topic, can also be intercut between clips.
- sound effects (sound bed): relevant to topic and content.
- scheduling at end: channel, time and day its will be on and also the title of the documentary.
- gives your a feel about what the documentary is about.
- clips from documentary- gets the audience intrigued.
- language: informal and clear voice.
- 30/40 seconds long.
- includes a sloagn.

In class we looked at various radio trailers to identify the codes and conventions of radio trailer.

this is our class notes on the codes and conventions of a radio trailer:

scripting the voiceover

Body image is considered to be a massively  important factor in a person life wether they be male or female. For girls, makeup is a key ingreedient for perfecting thw way you look. The beauty industry brings in about 250 millions pounds in the UK alone. This is a staggering amount to spend on something you wipe of each night.

On the other hand, weight is also a common problem in every day life with some cases going to the extreme causing anorexia or obesity. A healthy but time consuming way to loose weight is Weight Watchers. This gives people the stability when wanting to loose weight.

Cosmetic surgery in some cases is a life thretening choice, however, some proceeders can only take 20 minutes. Carol Mclaughan tells us about her experience.

Edit decision list

Counter Number	Shot Description/ other essential info	Type of Edit
00:08:48:01	Vox Pops: asking the general public about what different celebrities influence their style.	cut
00:00:01:12	Opening Titles	cut
00:00:00:00	Female putting on makeup on	cut
00:06:35:06	Pan of makeup and female putting more makeup on	cut
00:00:00:00	Stupid Girls music video(bathroom scene)	cut
00;00;00;00	Beautiful music video(mirror scene)	cut
00:06:35:06	Female walking up stairs then getting weight (fast speed)	cut
00:06:35:06	Weight watchers archive material	cut
00:00:09:18	Ruth Interview- weight watchers leader talking about weight loss programme	cut
00:00:02:05	Weight Watchers Cutaways: include weight watchers packages and also a person writing down her points	cut
00:00:00:00	Cutaways: Weight watchers food in freezers, cutaways	cut
00:00:42:07	Weight watchers on NHS- archive material	cut
00:03:19:17	Nathan Interview: talking about joining Weight Watchers	cut
00:00:42:07	Cutaways- before and after picture	cut
00:00:42:07	Cutaways- making healthy food	cut
00:00:04:05	Miss Borges Psychology teacher interview re-filmed	cut
	Cutaways of psychology posters	cut
00:00:00:19	Joe Deer  Personal Trainer second interview framed in a total fitness gym	cut
00:03:19:17	Nathan interview- talking about keeping fit	cut
00:11:32:03	Cutaways- Nathan in gym (boxing and weights)	cut
	Stupid Girls music video (cosmetic surgery scene)	cut
00:00:44:21	Carol Interview: talking about cosmetic surgery, framed in front of white background.	cut
00:00:02:05	Cutaways: pictures of Carol before cosmetic surgery	cut
	Archive material of cosmetic surgery	cut
00:00:48:15	Cutaway of Barbra Streisand	cut